What do you think of the first chapter of my book?

to be perfectly honest, this is awesome!! OK i just really LOVE books and reading so maybe I'm not really putting any constructive criticism into this but if this were made into a book i would totally read it and stay up until 5am in the morning reading this until i spontaneously fall unconscious and lose myself in the oblivion....... but then i'd probably dream of your book and visualize all the characters ;)